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Holding on to you
Contributed by
dezchapm
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2011 @ 08:17:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Im walking by your side in the summer sun
Im laughing trying to make you smile because you look like youre going to cry
You go and hide
When something is wrong with you
You keep me in the dark, never letting me out
I start to slip into the dark empty void know as space
So please pick me up and dont let me fall
Im falling back into the darkness
Help me, grab my hand
And please never let me go
The stars will cry when we all die, I dont want to say good bye
Please dont let me go, hold on tight
Im getting ready for the fight
Im not letting go, even if you let me go
If you fall into the black empty space know as depression
Ill help you out
I dont care what you say or what you do
It wont change the fact that
That no matter what happens
I will always love you
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dezchapm
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2011-03-23 08:17:30]
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Re: Holding on to you
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by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2011 @ 10:29:06 AM AEST
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| Not dark at all, but rather quite hopeful and encouraging! |
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Re: Holding on to you
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2011 @ 07:44:34 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Good writing. I didn't see it as dark either.
Blessing,
emy |
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