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Fables sweeten foolish tongues

To the spies born without spines

Opinions taste like snowflakes

Paranoia crawling up the hare

Trees wave with charred fingers

Battered by those candied smiles

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Vitamins

Contributed by duff on Friday, 25th March 2011 @ 08:40:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Like able sugar needing cane

Fables sweeten foolish tongues

To the spies born without spines

Opinions taste like snowflakes

Paranoia crawling up the hare

Trees wave with charred fingers

Battered by those candied smiles

Copyright © duff ... [ 2011-03-25 20:40:48]
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Re: Vitamins (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 11:11:48 AM AEST
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you want to swap the vitamins for anti-depressants.

Only joking! Scary though and I'm struggling to get it
(Says more about me than you).

Re: Vitamins (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 03:12:03 AM AEST
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Deep indeed! And as dark as a lonely Welsh mountain night. Writing like this is truly the work of a dark, imaginative mind. Well done.

Re: Vitamins (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 11:24:03 PM AEST
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The name of this passage along with it's content
is overwhelmingly intricate
each line tells a story of it's own in great depth
Your signature is so distinctive ,seeing the way you
string words together in it self is a delight
-Fables sweeten foolish tongues-
an instant classic line, just brillant
Truly enlightening write

-UNORTHODOX

Re: Vitamins (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Tuesday, 12th April 2011 @ 10:36:59 AM AEST
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This whole poem ROCKS! I wish it was mine. :P
sugar needing cane, opinions taste like snowflakes, battered by those candied smiles! Love it all. Great write. Can't wait for more.

ming

Re: Vitamins (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 04:06:38 PM AEST
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like a dark nature write, i love every line,

hugs n' love nessa

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