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Array ( [sid] => 165608 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Sorry for being Me [time] => 2011-04-01 15:39:27 [hometext] => Regret for who I am and the strains it puts on my relationships, especially my mother. [bodytext] => I am sorry,
For the things I've done and the hearts I've bruised,
For the times I thought I had nothing to lose,
The mistakes I've made and the advice I disregarded,
Ignored the plans you'd made and left you broken hearted.
Been selfish, ignorant and a troublesome child,
Thoughtless and distant, adrift in the wild.
The scars I've left you will hopefully heal,
Black, red and blue is the pain that you feel.
My mind is a poison, a chemical bath,
A T.V without noise on, a pitiful laugh.
I will try to rectify the wrongs that I've wrought,
The pain I will pacify, and the shame that I've brought. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 313 [topic] => 50 [informant] => Hydrobipo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

I'm Sorry for being Me

Contributed by Hydrobipo on Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 03:39:27 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

I am sorry,
For the things I've done and the hearts I've bruised,
For the times I thought I had nothing to lose,
The mistakes I've made and the advice I disregarded,
Ignored the plans you'd made and left you broken hearted.
Been selfish, ignorant and a troublesome child,
Thoughtless and distant, adrift in the wild.
The scars I've left you will hopefully heal,
Black, red and blue is the pain that you feel.
My mind is a poison, a chemical bath,
A T.V without noise on, a pitiful laugh.
I will try to rectify the wrongs that I've wrought,
The pain I will pacify, and the shame that I've brought.

Copyright © Hydrobipo ... [ 2011-04-01 15:39:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm Sorry for being Me (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl61 on Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 11:31:28 PM AEST
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Time marches on, and hindsight is almost always 20/20. I think this write it rather brilliant. The rhythm and rhyme structure work quite well, and everyone's at one time or another seeked a fair bit of forgiveness for stupid things we did way back when. Rally a fine penning here. tfs

Re: I'm Sorry for being Me (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 11:59:14 PM AEST
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A wonderful open and honest write that would definitely melt a mother's heart, best gift for mother's day I reckon.

Re: I'm Sorry for being Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Evanescencefreak on Wednesday, 13th April 2011 @ 12:06:42 PM AEST
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How... deep. You almost made me cry and to be honest that is saying something. I like 'My mind is a poison, a chemical bath' but it is not true, everyones mind has both good and bad parts. Sorry to lecture, I really like the poem anyway.

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