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There was a day not long ago

Though each day that passes seem like ten

A day that we were together

When I gazed in to your eyes as deep as the ocean

Where I saw your gorgeous smile

A day when I could actually see you, touch you, feel you

I wished time could stand still

But it would not

It was over too fast

Almost like a dream

I can still feel your lips on mine

Still taste your tongue

Feel your embrace

So it couldn’t be a dream could it?

I relive that day every day

Sometimes more than once

It was the best day in recent memory

In distant memory

I hold onto that day with great hope

Unrelenting eagerness

I hunger for another day like this

And many more

But if that would never be the case

I will remember and cherish it always

I will go to sleep at night with one thing on my mind

Knowing that no dream could match this reality

And that nothing can compare

To that day we shared a dream

That will never fade away

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As If It Were A Dream

Contributed by supertonguepunk on Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 04:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

There was a day not long ago

Though each day that passes seem like ten

A day that we were together

When I gazed in to your eyes as deep as the ocean

Where I saw your gorgeous smile

A day when I could actually see you, touch you, feel you

I wished time could stand still

But it would not

It was over too fast

Almost like a dream

I can still feel your lips on mine

Still taste your tongue

Feel your embrace

So it couldn’t be a dream could it?

I relive that day every day

Sometimes more than once

It was the best day in recent memory

In distant memory

I hold onto that day with great hope

Unrelenting eagerness

I hunger for another day like this

And many more

But if that would never be the case

I will remember and cherish it always

I will go to sleep at night with one thing on my mind

Knowing that no dream could match this reality

And that nothing can compare

To that day we shared a dream

That will never fade away

Copyright Â© supertonguepunk ... [ 2011-04-04 16:29:25]
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Re: As If It Were A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by 619Prisoner on Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 05:45:40 PM AEST
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Those moments may be hard to come by, but i am sure you will get it again.

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