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Not warm, too bleak and unexposed
Two twined as the third is out of synergy
And all three finally see how things broke

26 times of blissful & amative love described as chemistry
All lead to a wishful mountain top of hugs & one unproven entity

I walked back down 11 miles to a lover’s rush that was sent to me
I followed this path and thought very much this was meant to be
Until I followed and followed this love into the middle of a winter freeze
And this cold wind always blows

All that’s left is a beautiful stem- she was the rose
And a road that ends where this love has froz [comments] => 1 [counter] => 96 [topic] => 48 [informant] => danilove209 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

bleakly N and out of love

Contributed by danilove209 on Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 12:20:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

3 cards full of memories
Not warm, too bleak and unexposed
Two twined as the third is out of synergy
And all three finally see how things broke

26 times of blissful & amative love described as chemistry
All lead to a wishful mountain top of hugs & one unproven entity

I walked back down 11 miles to a lover’s rush that was sent to me
I followed this path and thought very much this was meant to be
Until I followed and followed this love into the middle of a winter freeze
And this cold wind always blows

All that’s left is a beautiful stem- she was the rose
And a road that ends where this love has froz

Copyright Â© danilove209 ... [ 2011-04-05 00:20:28]
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Re: bleakly N and out of love (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 04:33:41 AM AEST
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Well done. This is a very fine piece of writing. Nice rhyme and very easy on the mind. Thanks for sharing.

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