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In The Day
Contributed by
metalmouth666
on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Another setting sun,
Another day gone away.
My life has gone to hell,
Just like yesterday.
Another day wasted,
Another ripen problem.
From the tree of death,
Just like yesterday.
CHORUS:
You were the one for me
and I wish you could see,
All the pain I go thru.
Just to be with you...
But now your gone,
And I turn to song.
words and thoughts of mine,
comes out to song's and rhymes.
Another rising moon,
Another freezing night
My love has turned cold,
It happens every night.
Another piece of mind,
Another sanctuary.
A safe place to hide,
Happens everyday.
CHORUS:
You were the one for me
and I wish you could see,
All the pain I go thru.
Just to be with you...
But now your gone,
And I turn to song.
words and thoughts of mine,
comes out to song's and rhymes.
Another setting sun,
Another day gone away.
My life has gone to hell,
Just like yesterday.
Another day wasted,
Another ripen problem.
From the tree of death,
Just like yesterday.
CHORUS:x2
You were the one for me
and I wish you could see,
All the pain I go thru.
Just to be with you...
But now your gone,
And I turn to song.
words and thoughts of mine,
comes out to song's and rhymes.
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metalmouth666
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2003-04-26 23:05:00]
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Re: In The Day
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by razorbladerose on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 07:58:36 AM AEST
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WOW! As i was reading this, i could actually hear music behind it all....my fav. part lies in the chorus "But now your gone,
And I turn to song. " It's truthful and beautiful! Have you written music for it yet? I could see it sung with mid wave of hard music...meaning, not slow, but just in between in a hard rock/metal type. Have you thought about it yet?
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