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Array ( [sid] => 165823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sleep [time] => 2011-04-11 16:04:23 [hometext] => I was bored so I wrote this... nothing special or spectacular please comment and feedback =) [bodytext] => How much is he going to hurt me?
Goes through her head
As her drunk husband comes home
2 am left his wife all alone
She pretends she's asleep
But he doesn't care
He pulls off the sheet
Drags her out of bed
It's just not fair
He starts beating her
She doesn't scream
She just endures the pain

Soon....

Soon it'll be over
She thinks to her self
And he'll love me again
Tears roll down her eyes
Maybe he'll stop beating her
If she cries

He starts to choke her
YOU FLITHY WHORE! he shouts
Slowly she gets weak
She can't take no more
She can't fight back
Her eyes shut
For ever she shall sleep...



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Sleep

Contributed by Lonelyguy92 on Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 04:04:23 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



How much is he going to hurt me?
Goes through her head
As her drunk husband comes home
2 am left his wife all alone
She pretends she's asleep
But he doesn't care
He pulls off the sheet
Drags her out of bed
It's just not fair
He starts beating her
She doesn't scream
She just endures the pain

Soon....

Soon it'll be over
She thinks to her self
And he'll love me again
Tears roll down her eyes
Maybe he'll stop beating her
If she cries

He starts to choke her
YOU FLITHY WHORE! he shouts
Slowly she gets weak
She can't take no more
She can't fight back
Her eyes shut
For ever she shall sleep...







Copyright © Lonelyguy92 ... [ 2011-04-11 16:04:23]
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Re: Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by ElementZero on Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 05:50:24 PM AEST
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Good poem. Lots of good imagery in this poem. I actually seen that man and the beaten woman. Good job. Lol Probably a lame review but yeah.


Re: Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th April 2011 @ 05:56:29 PM AEST
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Put me to sleep too. zzzzzzz.


Re: Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Monday, 16th May 2011 @ 07:28:28 AM AEST
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not one of your jolly poets hay i feel this poem nice work dark is the new light


Re: Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 1st June 2011 @ 10:04:15 AM AEST
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This hits near my heart, so well written, vivid and real.

Michelle




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