Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 02-June 12:20:30 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 165894 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Impossible Rainbow [time] => 2011-04-16 16:51:06 [hometext] => My mentor gave me a challenge - I hope I have done him justice. [bodytext] => I spoke to a man, a wise man at that,
He has wisdom inside him he shares when we chat.
We had a discussion, on various things
About love and of life and what hope that it brings.

A deep understanding of everything here,
A man with an insight many would fear.
He gave me a challenge, or so it would seem,
to come up with a poem, with words that I gleamed.

He gave me a title, and after a while,
I took up the challenge, with barely a smile.
It took me a while, but here is my rhyme,
And I want to thank you , for taking the time.

An impossible rainbow? What do we see?
The extreme possibilities, whenever we breathe?
An impossible rainbow? Youre thinking too hard,
Its right there inside you, not written on cards.

An impossible rainbow, the dreams that we dream,
The unfilled experience that existing life brings.
The challenge for all who live on this earth,
Is to live every minute from the moment of birth.

Dont make the excuses, dont talk yourself out,
The impossible rainbow, is a rainbow of doubt.
The impossible rainbow is possible you see,
You just need to realise, you are born free.

You make your decisions, you weigh up the pros,
Just take the first step, on the pathway you chose.
Dont think its impossible, dont count yourself out,
Just look deep inside you, let the colours come out.

By living each moment , to set your soul free,
The impossible rainbow, is possible you see.
Be proud of your spirit, feel blessed as you are
let the colours surround you, to be seen from afar.


[comments] => 5 [counter] => 261 [topic] => 21 [informant] => thistle_and_fern [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
The Impossible Rainbow

Contributed by thistle_and_fern on Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 04:51:06 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I spoke to a man, a wise man at that,
He has wisdom inside him he shares when we chat.
We had a discussion, on various things
About love and of life and what hope that it brings.

A deep understanding of everything here,
A man with an insight many would fear.
He gave me a challenge, or so it would seem,
to come up with a poem, with words that I gleamed.

He gave me a title, and after a while,
I took up the challenge, with barely a smile.
It took me a while, but here is my rhyme,
And I want to thank you , for taking the time.

An impossible rainbow? What do we see?
The extreme possibilities, whenever we breathe?
An impossible rainbow? Youre thinking too hard,
Its right there inside you, not written on cards.

An impossible rainbow, the dreams that we dream,
The unfilled experience that existing life brings.
The challenge for all who live on this earth,
Is to live every minute from the moment of birth.

Dont make the excuses, dont talk yourself out,
The impossible rainbow, is a rainbow of doubt.
The impossible rainbow is possible you see,
You just need to realise, you are born free.

You make your decisions, you weigh up the pros,
Just take the first step, on the pathway you chose.
Dont think its impossible, dont count yourself out,
Just look deep inside you, let the colours come out.

By living each moment , to set your soul free,
The impossible rainbow, is possible you see.
Be proud of your spirit, feel blessed as you are
let the colours surround you, to be seen from afar.






Copyright © thistle_and_fern ... [ 2011-04-16 16:51:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: The Impossible Rainbow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 07:32:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I think you did!! This is awesome. I love the flow...
Jenni


Re: The Impossible Rainbow (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 17th April 2011 @ 08:43:40 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Very good


Re: The Impossible Rainbow (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 04:03:19 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Wonderful poem. I've never heard the phrase impossible rainbow, so very original. Not sure if I like the term, but its definitely original. hmmmm


Re: The Impossible Rainbow (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 10th June 2011 @ 02:11:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I think I'd have to say you picked up the challenge and ran with it perfectly.
A lovely piece washed with magic, what more can I say?

Steve


Re: The Impossible Rainbow (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 13th December 2013 @ 04:16:18 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
words washed with the wisdom of the ascended masters rays, beautiful.x




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com