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[title] => just let go
[time] => 2011-05-15 17:14:08
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[bodytext] => just drop my hand and let me go. ill go to a place where knowbody knows, who i am or where im at. ive gone too far theres no turning back. my thoughts are cloudy my soul is black. all this pain it comes in stacks. i sometimes wonder who i am. i dropped your love and lost a friend. so now i tell myself to just let go. if i do come back youll never know. engullfed in darkness im full of rage. this monster inside escaped its cage. i see the fear inside your eye. too see her sit there and start to cry. it turns me cold and twists my mind. just please let go it only takes time. just let go of all the pain. you can escape this stupid game. for all the people who feel the same. just let go of all the pain. maybe you can escape this fate. i brought it myself ill carry my weight.those tears will always catch my eyes. just let go as my soul fly"s
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just let go
Contributed by
poeticsnowman
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Sunday, 15th May 2011 @ 05:14:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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just drop my hand and let me go. ill go to a place where knowbody knows, who i am or where im at. ive gone too far theres no turning back. my thoughts are cloudy my soul is black. all this pain it comes in stacks. i sometimes wonder who i am. i dropped your love and lost a friend. so now i tell myself to just let go. if i do come back youll never know. engullfed in darkness im full of rage. this monster inside escaped its cage. i see the fear inside your eye. too see her sit there and start to cry. it turns me cold and twists my mind. just please let go it only takes time. just let go of all the pain. you can escape this stupid game. for all the people who feel the same. just let go of all the pain. maybe you can escape this fate. i brought it myself ill carry my weight.those tears will always catch my eyes. just let go as my soul fly"s
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Re: just let go
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th May 2011 @ 07:03:12 PM AEST
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| VERY GOOD!! I love the flow and I love how the emotion is shown through out the whole write. Very simple but very powerful at the same time. |
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Re: just let go
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by Butterflyperfect on
Sunday, 15th May 2011 @ 11:39:38 PM AEST
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| In this I like the emotion... it comes off well and I can feel it in its depth. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: just let go
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by InfinitePoet on
Monday, 23rd May 2011 @ 11:49:52 AM AEST
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I loved the flow and the words you used to describe all those emotions too!! Keep writing and posting!!
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Dana |
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Re: just let go
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by petulinka on
Sunday, 29th May 2011 @ 03:32:25 PM AEST
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| like the flow as well!!!:)..some sentences are really good!:) |
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