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[sid] => 166613
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Tobias
[time] => 2011-06-24 14:16:44
[hometext] => Not really poetry, but whatever. im sad.
[bodytext] => And these cigarettes i smoke, I dont even enjoy. But they remind me of a once better time. When waking up didn’t hurt.. And i never wondered if breathing is optional I smoke throughout the night Reminding myself of your lips pressed against mine The taste of booze and nicotine and love and truth Now i just taste the memory of that. The thing about this Is that i think (and hope) doing this will get you back Whilst i know you don’t see me do it.. You dont see me smoke You dont think of me.. Cause its a Friday night.. So youre out with friends.. A group i used to consider myself in.. Im not invited to your life.. So i keep smoking till dawn.. Hoping.. Wondering if you ever think of me.. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 22 [informant] => gothchick [notes] => Commenting on your own poem does not ensure others will see your reply. Please do not comment on your own work. Your comment on this poem has been removed. You can send someone a private message if you wish to thank them. Thank you. Moderator_18 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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