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off your mask
pull off

face the black
night takes flight

fright swallows

hole

rumbles
thunder
flattened out

as well as

The Aftermath

you and I
the
unholy
alliance

not you
not
no. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 116 [topic] => 73 [informant] => ming [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Judas hug

Contributed by ming on Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 12:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

pull

off your mask
pull off

face the black
night takes flight

fright swallows

hole

rumbles
thunder
flattened out

as well as

The Aftermath

you and I
the
unholy
alliance

not you
not
no.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2011-07-15 12:13:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Judas hug (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 01:45:00 PM AEST
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What gets me about your work
is it never gets same, or boring
I always get these dead zone like glimpses from your mind
in this one the creature unveiled is like many of our experiences
where something is not at all what it seemed
leaving us to choose, who we really are in discovering so
depth inspired, from an old hand, well scripted

-UNORTHODOX

Re: Judas hug (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 10:50:49 PM AEST
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I try not to post comments on your poems too often because I don't want you to think I'm only doing it because you post on my mine. I do want you to know, however, that I enjoy your poetry greatly and yours is the first that I click on when i see it.

I also enjoy reading your comments on my own poetry, and am grateful for them even when the piece is unworthy.

Always, abraham

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