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Array ( [sid] => 166942 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can't be with. I can't be without. [time] => 2011-08-06 15:11:29 [hometext] => A month without him. Without seeing him, barely hearing and it would appear that I can be with him, or without him. I hate those scenario's >< [bodytext] => The calming presence of you
Overwhelmed me today
I thought I was over it all
I thought it’d all gone away.
We seem to gel beautifully together
Like the clouds and the sky
But we tire, bore and aggravate each other
I’m forever asking why…
The minute I saw you
Walking through the busy crowd
My terrified side disappeared
I swear I nearly cried.
It’s always being like that with you
You can erase all the worry
But a single word, an unwanted touch
Could fill my mind with fury.
I didn’t want to let you go
When it was time to say goodbye
I knew we were both destined home now
And I knew it wasn’t right to cry.
And I felt that strange fullness again
As I walked away
Until I became endorsed in panic
As I had just missed my train.
Automatic instinct took flight
I rushed through everyone barriers, upstairs
All whilst frantically phoning you
Praying you’d still be there.
I phoned, phoned
You didn’t answer
I was collapsing inside
As my heart got faster.
But at the top of the stairs
As I was racing about what to do
Just in front of me
I saw you.
I rushed myself into your arms
That single solitary place
That area, like nowhere else
I knows completely safe.
It all going to be ok now
Don’t panic, you can now be calm
We don’t slot together, we press on one another
But I’ll always feel safe in your arms.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 125 [topic] => 14 [informant] => CommasCanSeperate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
I can't be with. I can't be without.

Contributed by CommasCanSeperate on Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 03:11:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



The calming presence of you
Overwhelmed me today
I thought I was over it all
I thought it’d all gone away.
We seem to gel beautifully together
Like the clouds and the sky
But we tire, bore and aggravate each other
I’m forever asking why…
The minute I saw you
Walking through the busy crowd
My terrified side disappeared
I swear I nearly cried.
It’s always being like that with you
You can erase all the worry
But a single word, an unwanted touch
Could fill my mind with fury.
I didn’t want to let you go
When it was time to say goodbye
I knew we were both destined home now
And I knew it wasn’t right to cry.
And I felt that strange fullness again
As I walked away
Until I became endorsed in panic
As I had just missed my train.
Automatic instinct took flight
I rushed through everyone barriers, upstairs
All whilst frantically phoning you
Praying you’d still be there.
I phoned, phoned
You didn’t answer
I was collapsing inside
As my heart got faster.
But at the top of the stairs
As I was racing about what to do
Just in front of me
I saw you.
I rushed myself into your arms
That single solitary place
That area, like nowhere else
I knows completely safe.
It all going to be ok now
Don’t panic, you can now be calm
We don’t slot together, we press on one another
But I’ll always feel safe in your arms.




Copyright © CommasCanSeperate ... [ 2011-08-06 15:11:29]
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Re: I can't be with. I can't be without. (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 04:53:43 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this very much and it's quite relatable with my current relationship; I adore my boyfriend very much but here are things (perhaps he doesnt even know since I dont want to offend him) that tick me off about him. I never knew such a combination could exist! By the way, I must say you wrote this eloquently and it flows oh so well. May God bless you in Jesus' name,
Deidra


Re: I can't be with. I can't be without. (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 05:51:28 PM AEST
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The avid sincerity is what strikes me most
It is somewhat perplexing to me
how another person can make us feel safe,
as I understand it too well
you have a strong artistic voice,and keen storytelling ability
this piece truly is gripping!

-UNORTHODOX


Re: I can't be with. I can't be without. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 7th August 2011 @ 12:20:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
blessings




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