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First tooth is through for you-know-who.
Big gnasher for the grinner.
An extra sparkle to his smile
and T-bone steak for dinner.

Well maybe not - that needs a lot
but a single tooth gets lonely.
Till its fellow molars make the cut
he'll munch on mish-mash only.

He sits and waits and spies our plates,
pretends his ration's drab.
Behind those lamblike big brown eyes
he's planning smash and grab.

Too soon he'll crunch a Sunday lunch,
too soon a toddler be.
Too soon he'll flash those pearly whites
...... and show more teeth than me.

------

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The tooth faerie cometh

Contributed by spud on Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 12:44:57 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



* * * *

First tooth is through for you-know-who.
Big gnasher for the grinner.
An extra sparkle to his smile
and T-bone steak for dinner.

Well maybe not - that needs a lot
but a single tooth gets lonely.
Till its fellow molars make the cut
he'll munch on mish-mash only.

He sits and waits and spies our plates,
pretends his ration's drab.
Behind those lamblike big brown eyes
he's planning smash and grab.

Too soon he'll crunch a Sunday lunch,
too soon a toddler be.
Too soon he'll flash those pearly whites
...... and show more teeth than me.

------





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Re: The tooth faerie cometh (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 06:03:30 PM AEST
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That's really cute friend.
Blessings,
emy


Re: The tooth faerie cometh (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 09:48:12 AM AEST
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Nice one Tommy! It's got me smiling. Take care,
Dennis.


Re: The tooth faerie cometh (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 10:18:55 AM AEST
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The toof the whole toof and nothing but the toof, awww got us all smiling. Great description....... behind those lamb like big brown eyes.......
worded with warm loving affection for a much loved grandson x


Re: The tooth faerie cometh (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 07:05:53 PM AEST
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This is more than a poem...it is love. Great one!

ming


Re: The tooth faerie cometh (User Rating: 1 )
by Tracy on Thursday, 19th January 2012 @ 08:36:24 AM AEST
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Good thing I have a Scottish background or I would not get some of your wording. LOL I just can't believe how great you are at the whole rhyming, rhythm, meaning AND comedy! Geez.
(standing ovation here)


Re: The tooth faerie cometh (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 03:14:24 PM AEST
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Ah, the cycle of life and love as they sure do grow up fast. Definitely brought a smile to this ol' face.



Re: The tooth faerie cometh (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 01:38:47 PM AEST
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ha! sooo adorable! beautifully brilliant images,

hugs n' love nessa




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