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Array ( [sid] => 16703 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Angeline [time] => 2003-04-29 11:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => suppose the rivers just suddenly

stop

how deep would you run?

she says, "i've got these pretty
ruffles on."

and that means what to you?

okay you can dance

2,000 dances
it'd make sense, since

we fought for forests
we barely know

and cry for dirt
that birthed those forests

and screamed at the creator
of the dirt

and Blaire took Blanche
back to the dance

and here they come again

tell me what that means to you

and she'd love to be
the Devil's Seed

so we cried on angels' wings
for you and only you,
Angeline [comments] => 3 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 39 [informant] => boobies [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Angeline

Contributed by boobies on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



suppose the rivers just suddenly

stop

how deep would you run?

she says, "i've got these pretty
ruffles on."

and that means what to you?

okay you can dance

2,000 dances
it'd make sense, since

we fought for forests
we barely know

and cry for dirt
that birthed those forests

and screamed at the creator
of the dirt

and Blaire took Blanche
back to the dance

and here they come again

tell me what that means to you

and she'd love to be
the Devil's Seed

so we cried on angels' wings
for you and only you,
Angeline




Copyright © boobies ... [ 2003-04-29 11:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Angeline (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:50:36 AM AEST
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AAHH such a sad story well written!
Christina


Re: Angeline (User Rating: 1 )
by Sara on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 11:58:03 PM AEST
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wow... not what i expected... great write..!!!!
<3 Sara


Re: Angeline (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 04:19:07 PM AEST
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i love your poem here and style!!!!!
hugs nessa




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