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Even just a silhouette
But the road seem endless
The night seems too dark
Lights flicker.
Stars shine.
The moon blinks.
Lightening up the road
That boasts with pride
Whilst the girl is swallowed
with emptiness
Her heart shattered in pieces
Her soul dies...
The last teardrop on her eyes
The comfort she yearns
is but a lump in the throat
A dream from the past.

The light dies.
The stars stop to shine.
The moon hides away.
The road still is endless.
But on the young woman's face
Is a smile of contentment
That shatters "FOREVER" in a billion pieces
The wait was long.
But the wait is over.
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A YOUNG GIRL AWAITS...

Contributed by angelabella on Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 04:59:58 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

A young girl awaits....
Even just a silhouette
But the road seem endless
The night seems too dark
Lights flicker.
Stars shine.
The moon blinks.
Lightening up the road
That boasts with pride
Whilst the girl is swallowed
with emptiness
Her heart shattered in pieces
Her soul dies...
The last teardrop on her eyes
The comfort she yearns
is but a lump in the throat
A dream from the past.

The light dies.
The stars stop to shine.
The moon hides away.
The road still is endless.
But on the young woman's face
Is a smile of contentment
That shatters "FOREVER" in a billion pieces
The wait was long.
But the wait is over.

Copyright © angelabella ... [ 2011-08-25 04:59:58]
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Re: A YOUNG GIRL AWAITS... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 05:04:11 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
This write is very powerful and wise.
Big blessings,
emy

Re: A YOUNG GIRL AWAITS... (User Rating: 1 )
by mvvenkataraman on Saturday, 27th August 2011 @ 06:55:37 AM AEST
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Dear poetess Angelabela,

As your dad is not with you
I had for you a very sad view

On that grounds I read your poem
Which happened to be a real gem

Still the ending is not very clear
How the girl has removed tear?

What made her get confidence?
Here struggles my intelligence

Her mind, has she made up?
How has she got the pep?

The poem went on very fluently
Expression was made gently

Suddenly the end gives confusion
May be I have no skill's possession

On the whole the poem is nice
I must make myself extra wise.

With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,

mvvenkataraman

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