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Array ( [sid] => 167299 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out of All [time] => 2011-09-08 15:02:18 [hometext] => For my lost darling. We exist near each other yet are worlds apart. *sigh* [bodytext] => Accumulative worries and thoughts flooding my mind
Such tension is the consequence of my choices being blind
Filled with sorrow am I and yet I am running toward some light
Or perhaps tis merely a figment of my distorted imagination
Why you out of all fell for me I shall never know

You are not completely malign yet not angelic
Almost fallen you are and must be caught
I tried to keep you from slipping through the cracks
Yet my intentions were drowned out by emotions and lust
Tell me why would you out of all let me make those mistakes

Now we are at a crossroads hesitantly trying to communicate
Secretly yearning for each other's affection denyingly
Trying not to fall again is my intention. What is yours?
Would you out of all change for the better? For me? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 105 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Deidra_Carmichael [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Out of All

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Thursday, 8th September 2011 @ 03:02:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Accumulative worries and thoughts flooding my mind
Such tension is the consequence of my choices being blind
Filled with sorrow am I and yet I am running toward some light
Or perhaps tis merely a figment of my distorted imagination
Why you out of all fell for me I shall never know

You are not completely malign yet not angelic
Almost fallen you are and must be caught
I tried to keep you from slipping through the cracks
Yet my intentions were drowned out by emotions and lust
Tell me why would you out of all let me make those mistakes

Now we are at a crossroads hesitantly trying to communicate
Secretly yearning for each other's affection denyingly
Trying not to fall again is my intention. What is yours?
Would you out of all change for the better? For me?

Copyright © Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2011-09-08 15:02:18]
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Re: Out of All (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Thursday, 8th September 2011 @ 03:44:22 PM AEST
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Another beautiful -- and sad -- poem. Sounds like the real thing -- LOVE -- to me... I wouldn't ever suggest -- I know better... Still did I not hear something in those verses? Well what do I know -- I'm only a man (and 60 years old at that). You express your passionate turmoil in an exquisite --and delicate -- way -- helps, I hope, to ease the pain... YOUTH!--FlintHunter

Re: Out of All (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 8th September 2011 @ 07:57:27 PM AEST
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Very sad friend but great writing.
We all mess up.
Blessings, healing,
emy

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