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Array ( [sid] => 16731 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Release [time] => 2003-04-29 22:05:00 [hometext] => When a marriage dies it is a horrible thing. When words are constantly used to hurt and tear down its a tragedy. This was a dark time in my life. [bodytext] => Let me stroke your face as you comfort others, let me hold you while you cry
lay your head upon my breasts, while the inside of me dies

Darkness surrounds now, no way out, a soul is dying, a heart cries out
you are the lucky one, who doesnt have to feel, I am the damned one, my
pain is real

The candle burns out on my soul, the flicker loses its glow
I feel myself falling deeper in despair, I feel my lungs begging for just an
ounce of air

No one hears, no one sees, life goes on except inside of me
how long must I be in torment, how long must I grieve
how long do I wait for my heart not to bleed

I've tried the light, I've searched the darkness, I've seen everything in between
tis all the same, will never change, I will never be free "sigh"

Im always ok, I've always been and I will always have to be

Somewhere along the way I was cursed to this life I lead
was it that gentle touch I gave, was it a kind word I breathed
was it something I did when I was needed, was it always meant to be this
way for me

Do I swear to never feel, never heal, never be someone's healer, lover, listener
mother, sister or friend, what the hell does it really matter in the end

I've been torn down one cell at a time, I've been dismembered, one limb, one
eye, thrown to the wolves, betrayed, deceived, and all because I was
a stupid fool who believed

Let me stroke your face as you comfort others, let me hold you while you cry
lay your head upon my breasts, while the inside of me dies.







By: Shabby © Copyright 2002 All Rights Reserved [comments] => 4 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Shabby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Release

Contributed by Shabby on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Let me stroke your face as you comfort others, let me hold you while you cry
lay your head upon my breasts, while the inside of me dies

Darkness surrounds now, no way out, a soul is dying, a heart cries out
you are the lucky one, who doesnt have to feel, I am the damned one, my
pain is real

The candle burns out on my soul, the flicker loses its glow
I feel myself falling deeper in despair, I feel my lungs begging for just an
ounce of air

No one hears, no one sees, life goes on except inside of me
how long must I be in torment, how long must I grieve
how long do I wait for my heart not to bleed

I've tried the light, I've searched the darkness, I've seen everything in between
tis all the same, will never change, I will never be free "sigh"

Im always ok, I've always been and I will always have to be

Somewhere along the way I was cursed to this life I lead
was it that gentle touch I gave, was it a kind word I breathed
was it something I did when I was needed, was it always meant to be this
way for me

Do I swear to never feel, never heal, never be someone's healer, lover, listener
mother, sister or friend, what the hell does it really matter in the end

I've been torn down one cell at a time, I've been dismembered, one limb, one
eye, thrown to the wolves, betrayed, deceived, and all because I was
a stupid fool who believed

Let me stroke your face as you comfort others, let me hold you while you cry
lay your head upon my breasts, while the inside of me dies.







By: Shabby © Copyright 2002 All Rights Reserved




Copyright © Shabby ... [ 2003-04-29 22:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Release (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:48:03 AM AEST
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Shabby I couldnt imagine this!
How horrible! Good write! Christina


Re: Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 05:32:37 AM AEST
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Hows it shabby, Love the poem, Really sad though, my heart goes out to you.
Excellent write keep it up.


Re: Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Shabby on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:13:42 AM AEST
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Thank you for taking the time to read and respond Christina....All I want is to touch people with my poems...I was nervous about posting my work...


Re: Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Shabby on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:15:13 AM AEST
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Thanks for reading my poem Kindred...You know I appreciate your critiques




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