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[aid] => mick
[title] => the girl
[time] => 2011-09-09 11:01:28
[hometext] => hope you enjoy
[bodytext] => as he pelted through the pitch black darkness the wind howling past the thought of home began to dawn in his mind,the chase the race he hoped he would last the world spinning around the dark wood panning into and around the trees then suddenly he stopped to a freeze why was he dashing he was stong , brave and inderpendent as voices and cackeling came pounding through the tall dark trees he curld into a ball and swimming in his mind why dose bad ***** always happen to me the boys arrived and started to haunt and taughment poke and prod a boy turnd to another and gave i vigerous nod they gave a quick tug off a tree branched and brick were gave to all three to hit and smash the poor boy at the age of 15 this would kill and distroy bloodshed and moans groans no one could hear fear of life fear fear as a siren came towards the story shouold start not with a run but with great awards as the boys ran away to tell firends about there day , the boy layed flat on the ground still in a curl his last throughts was still of that one girl [comments] => 1 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 43 [informant] => greyboi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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