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Array ( [sid] => 167362 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter [time] => 2011-09-14 09:10:46 [hometext] => This poem is a collaborative effort by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter. It's not quite unorthodox, nor is it quite Flint-ish -- a lot of fun to write -- to get out of our singluar selves for a moment or three... [bodytext] =>


A Colombian Man


OKAY. I thought to write something
Cute or smart or poetic and
Like literary and all that --
Then the phone rang. It was Gabe. He
Told me Karla's uncle just died.
The man lived in Colombia.

This man in Colombia, see,
To me, he was just a man at best...
As the news began to set in,
I found myself in a flashback —
But this one wasn't of my own...
What came next, I won't soon forget.

...I was somewhere in Colombia --
Tropical breeze -- palm trees -- Okay
I was he -- the man -- ninety years old.
I heard the telephone ring -- I --
I answered it. "Hello?" -- Spoke a cold voice:
"Is it time?" “Who," I said, "is this?"




UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter (2011) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 25 [informant] => FlintHunter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter

Contributed by FlintHunter on Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 09:10:46 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems




A Colombian Man


OKAY. I thought to write something
Cute or smart or poetic and
Like literary and all that --
Then the phone rang. It was Gabe. He
Told me Karla's uncle just died.
The man lived in Colombia.

This man in Colombia, see,
To me, he was just a man at best...
As the news began to set in,
I found myself in a flashback —
But this one wasn't of my own...
What came next, I won't soon forget.

...I was somewhere in Colombia --
Tropical breeze -- palm trees -- Okay
I was he -- the man -- ninety years old.
I heard the telephone ring -- I --
I answered it. "Hello?" -- Spoke a cold voice:
"Is it time?" “Who," I said, "is this?"




UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter (2011)




Copyright © FlintHunter ... [ 2011-09-14 09:10:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter (User Rating: 1 )
by Savannah1085 on Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 09:20:54 AM AEST
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..............Wow....let me guess....the caller was Destiny? Death? I'm not sure, but that was a really great poem :) Great job

Your #1 fan -Savvy


Re: A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter (User Rating: 1 )
by aulakh on Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 06:29:27 PM AEST
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death was great sooth. but you described situation 'its wonderful experience how man feel when he alive. very good poem.


Re: A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 05:46:32 AM AEST
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SPOOKY COOL


Re: A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 10:03:58 AM AEST
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Nice indeed. Time life death and the unknown... a combination of these things sets a definite tone. great job.


ming




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