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Array ( [sid] => 167381 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loneliness Grips My Heart. [time] => 2011-09-15 23:21:45 [hometext] => This is my first poem I have ever really taken the time to write. So please be easy on me! [bodytext] => Loneliness grips my heart.
Like a deep ache that has no remedy, loneliness grips me.
I sit here alone, with no one but myself for company.
He has been here too long, he alone, is unwanted company.

Loneliness grips my heart.
The rain never ends, and it seems like the clouds will never go away.
Just when when the sunshine begins to pierce through the grey.
Darker clouds appear, and all hope begins to fade away.

Loneliness grips my heart.
I see them walk side by side, with shining eyes.
As they hold hands, and laugh oh so happily.
I sigh, knowing that will never be me.

Loneliness grips my heart.
I see them all together, looking as free as can be.
Eating, drinking, laughing together about the day.
I think to myself, why, oh why, can't that be me? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Sirath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Loneliness Grips My Heart.

Contributed by Sirath on Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 11:21:45 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Loneliness grips my heart.
Like a deep ache that has no remedy, loneliness grips me.
I sit here alone, with no one but myself for company.
He has been here too long, he alone, is unwanted company.

Loneliness grips my heart.
The rain never ends, and it seems like the clouds will never go away.
Just when when the sunshine begins to pierce through the grey.
Darker clouds appear, and all hope begins to fade away.

Loneliness grips my heart.
I see them walk side by side, with shining eyes.
As they hold hands, and laugh oh so happily.
I sigh, knowing that will never be me.

Loneliness grips my heart.
I see them all together, looking as free as can be.
Eating, drinking, laughing together about the day.
I think to myself, why, oh why, can't that be me?

Copyright © Sirath ... [ 2011-09-15 23:21:45]
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Re: Loneliness Grips My Heart. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 16th September 2011 @ 01:44:05 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great writing. Keep it up you are a natural.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Loneliness Grips My Heart. (User Rating: 1 )
by mvvenkataraman on Saturday, 17th September 2011 @ 04:36:55 AM AEST
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Dear respected Sirath,

"The sweetest songs are those that tell the saddest thoughts'"- P B Shelley.

Your poem is truly touching
Tears the lines are fetching
Its beauty my heart is catching
My mind it is really enriching.

With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,

mvvenkataraman

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