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Your blood he made you bleed but yet you still bore his seeds

The endless fights the tortured nights, the tip of the knife that reached your insides,

The screams from your kids as they watched you get beat and still you love him and bow to his feet

You claim he loves you and he will get better one day, but is that when he buries you and send you to heaven to stay?
What happened to your dreams? Are they now part of your past?

Don’t say its about your kids that you’re trying to make this relationship last

For your daughter will grow up not understanding the truth, she will only believe that the husband has the right to beat you.

What about your son? Will he understand the truth or will he be like daddy and beat his wife too?

Forget about your love for him and move on with your life or its going to be about your death in the next poem I right
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It Cant Be Love

Contributed by m33sh on Sunday, 25th September 2011 @ 08:58:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The pain you endure I see it in your eyes, The hurt you feel is more than a crime

Your blood he made you bleed but yet you still bore his seeds

The endless fights the tortured nights, the tip of the knife that reached your insides,

The screams from your kids as they watched you get beat and still you love him and bow to his feet

You claim he loves you and he will get better one day, but is that when he buries you and send you to heaven to stay?
What happened to your dreams? Are they now part of your past?

Don’t say its about your kids that you’re trying to make this relationship last

For your daughter will grow up not understanding the truth, she will only believe that the husband has the right to beat you.

What about your son? Will he understand the truth or will he be like daddy and beat his wife too?

Forget about your love for him and move on with your life or its going to be about your death in the next poem I right

Copyright Â© m33sh ... [ 2011-09-25 08:58:00]
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Re: It Cant Be Love (User Rating: 1 )
by marsh on Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 01:04:55 AM AEST
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A reflection of the dilemma of spouses trapped in abusive relatioships.well-strutured and worth all attention received thus far-MARSH

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