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and the sound of you makes the most exquisite shape,
like an angel calling calling
you are calling,

what a beautiful sound to make,
and the sound of you, makes the most exquisite shape
i hear you calling
calling
you are calling,

like a symphony deep from out of space,
sung by the angels,sung to re ignite our faith,
cause we are
falling, falling falling
we are falling,

Into the safety net of your grace,
144000, here to save the human race,
from falling falling falling
they hear you calling,

in white laiment, they repeat your song,
they see your shape
and they
sing along,
no throne of man, but gods mount zion,
where sheep lay down now with the subdued lion,

what a beautiful sound you make, when you sing the new song
and gods love takes shape.

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beautiful sound

Contributed by alicewhite on Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 04:00:05 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

What a beautiful sound you make,
and the sound of you makes the most exquisite shape,
like an angel calling calling
you are calling,

what a beautiful sound to make,
and the sound of you, makes the most exquisite shape
i hear you calling
calling
you are calling,

like a symphony deep from out of space,
sung by the angels,sung to re ignite our faith,
cause we are
falling, falling falling
we are falling,

Into the safety net of your grace,
144000, here to save the human race,
from falling falling falling
they hear you calling,

in white laiment, they repeat your song,
they see your shape
and they
sing along,
no throne of man, but gods mount zion,
where sheep lay down now with the subdued lion,

what a beautiful sound you make, when you sing the new song
and gods love takes shape.

Copyright © alicewhite ... [ 2011-10-01 16:00:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: beautiful sound (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 07:27:39 PM AEST
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These lyrics are beautifully penned. Well done. :o) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it.

*S* Cynthia

Re: beautiful sound (User Rating: 1 )
by Barries on Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 01:51:21 AM AEST
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What beutiful sound you make!

Re: beautiful sound (User Rating: 1 )
by hray42 on Saturday, 3rd March 2012 @ 06:26:48 PM AEST
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Once again.. very nice!! I like the words which you use.. very artistic and intelligent.. I guess you have to have both qualities to do this stuff..

Re: beautiful sound (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Saturday, 17th March 2012 @ 07:24:15 PM AEST
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such a beautiful write indeed. i wish i would of found your work before now. i guess it doesn't matter how long it takes, as long as i found it. :) your songs should be heard around the nation, and the world. they are incredible.

Re: beautiful sound (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st January 2013 @ 12:03:13 AM AEST
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Thanks for alluding to this poem you wrote. It's very spiritual.
You just feel it like a good vibe maybe on a street corner,
like a song and you look around and smile. It's nice!

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