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Array ( [sid] => 167648 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Peonies. [time] => 2011-10-05 16:57:24 [hometext] => I love the beautiful peonies...like most of the Chinese. [bodytext] => Oh, I have been waiting for my peonies bloom.
The peonies were planted half a year before.
I did together with my wife to dig two holes and planted.
Two new peonies were planted with our warm love.

We spent an hour to dig two holes for the peonies.
These two peonies were planted before our Asian journey.
Our love has been kept on for these two peonies.
The new flowers’ buds were first time found.

We were happy for they newly appear in the world.
One day we suddenly found some snails on its soil.
The first bud of a peony was cruelly destroyed.
My wife felt unhappy immediately and hated snails.

We decided to search the enemy around the peonies.
A more effective method is using snail’s killer.
For the sake of saving our peonies we did as guards.
Haha! We finally see our first peony flower on its stem

The beautiful flower looks like a baby face.
There is light yellow red on its flower no differs.
I love this first newly born flower baby face.
We imagine there will be more these beauties.
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The Peonies.

Contributed by alwong on Wednesday, 5th October 2011 @ 04:57:24 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Oh, I have been waiting for my peonies bloom.
The peonies were planted half a year before.
I did together with my wife to dig two holes and planted.
Two new peonies were planted with our warm love.

We spent an hour to dig two holes for the peonies.
These two peonies were planted before our Asian journey.
Our love has been kept on for these two peonies.
The new flowers’ buds were first time found.

We were happy for they newly appear in the world.
One day we suddenly found some snails on its soil.
The first bud of a peony was cruelly destroyed.
My wife felt unhappy immediately and hated snails.

We decided to search the enemy around the peonies.
A more effective method is using snail’s killer.
For the sake of saving our peonies we did as guards.
Haha! We finally see our first peony flower on its stem

The beautiful flower looks like a baby face.
There is light yellow red on its flower no differs.
I love this first newly born flower baby face.
We imagine there will be more these beauties.

Copyright Â© alwong ... [ 2011-10-05 16:57:24]
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Re: The Peonies. (User Rating: 1 )
by Tracy on Tuesday, 17th January 2012 @ 02:17:07 PM AEST
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What a charming idea for you and your wife to plant these together. My mother loved peonies and we had many bushes in our garden. My favorite line is:
"The beautiful flower looks like a baby face."
I can see just how beautiful the flower is and how precious to you! :)

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