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Array ( [sid] => 167897 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A QUEER DEATH -- by ammar and FlintHunter [time] => 2011-10-17 11:50:26 [hometext] => 'A QUEER DEATH' is a collaborative poem by ammar & FlintHunter. It's the second one we have written together. Sharing authorship has proven to be a very enjoyable and exciting experience. Hope you like the poem! [bodytext] =>



A QUEER DEATH



The person was asleep — I thought —
As lay he on the forest floor;
A closer look the Truth then brought:
I saw the man did breathe no more

Then leaned I o’er his fallen form,
I heard a beat! I gave a start! —
Then saw ‘twas but the watch he wore —
Had whispered not his lifeless heart.

Beside him knelt I — open-mouthed —
But words came not upon my breath;
A primal howl — instead — came out —
Ungodly growl — shriek of death!

But ere could I recover well,
Than distant movement caught my eye —
Swift struck within me danger-bell!
My ward — poisoned! I knew not why:

Tho’ knew I how such came to be —
And who assassin doom’d that day —
‘Twas Nature’s deed.. as did I see
Sly serpent hissing slide away.





________________________
ammar and FlintHunter (2011)

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A QUEER DEATH -- by ammar and FlintHunter

Contributed by FlintHunter on Monday, 17th October 2011 @ 11:50:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems






A QUEER DEATH



The person was asleep — I thought —
As lay he on the forest floor;
A closer look the Truth then brought:
I saw the man did breathe no more

Then leaned I o’er his fallen form,
I heard a beat! I gave a start! —
Then saw ‘twas but the watch he wore —
Had whispered not his lifeless heart.

Beside him knelt I — open-mouthed —
But words came not upon my breath;
A primal howl — instead — came out —
Ungodly growl — shriek of death!

But ere could I recover well,
Than distant movement caught my eye —
Swift struck within me danger-bell!
My ward — poisoned! I knew not why:

Tho’ knew I how such came to be —
And who assassin doom’d that day —
‘Twas Nature’s deed.. as did I see
Sly serpent hissing slide away.





________________________
ammar and FlintHunter (2011)





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Re: A QUEER DEATH -- by ammar and FlintHunter (User Rating: 1 )
by KHANVICT on Monday, 17th October 2011 @ 12:17:27 PM AEST
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Amazing poem, as a result of a wonderful collaboration. I love the writing style, and the wording. PEACE


Re: A QUEER DEATH -- by ammar and FlintHunter (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Monday, 17th October 2011 @ 02:24:47 PM AEST
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Hi, thats a really clever poem ,you both write really well. To me its decribing natures life cycle. We are all aware that the clock stops ticking for us all in the end. Fear becomes our own monster or sepent, we become scared rigid but we must all move forward.



Re: A QUEER DEATH -- by ammar and FlintHunter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 03:20:51 AM AEST
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i really liked this poem. it's unique, different. everything about it has a style of it's own. you both have talent.


Re: A QUEER DEATH -- by ammar and FlintHunter (User Rating: 1 )
by Anopenheart on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 02:32:56 AM AEST
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Like this a lot. Very creative but still easily understandable. I also liked the fact that It didnt end the way I thought it would. The murderous snake was a nice surprise. Keep it up!


Re: A QUEER DEATH -- by ammar and FlintHunter (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 09:52:03 AM AEST
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You two write very well together. And being in the Fall a time of death (nature-wise for us in the US) it had a great 'feel' to it. Love this!


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