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Array ( [sid] => 167942 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Free Falling [time] => 2011-10-19 18:42:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => He tells me he likes me
but flirts with every other girl
and
ignores me

He’s so perfect and I’m
so
so ugly.

He’s so funny
and popular
and I’m so

well

not.

He’s every girls dream
and
I thought he was mine

But he obviously didn’t feel the same
though he said he did

I guess it really was all a lie.

I thought he was meant for me
I really did
but he can honestly go for her.

Go for the girl you dated last year
go for the girl who we talked about for weeks

talk to the girl that when you were dating her
you told me you talked to me more

I honestly can’t stop you
you’re never going to change.

It hurts.

the worst part isn’t that I’m falling for him

its that he’s just not there to catch me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 101 [topic] => 22 [informant] => blondeandbeautiful [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Free Falling

Contributed by blondeandbeautiful on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 06:42:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

He tells me he likes me
but flirts with every other girl
and
ignores me

He’s so perfect and I’m
so
so ugly.

He’s so funny
and popular
and I’m so

well

not.

He’s every girls dream
and
I thought he was mine

But he obviously didn’t feel the same
though he said he did

I guess it really was all a lie.

I thought he was meant for me
I really did
but he can honestly go for her.

Go for the girl you dated last year
go for the girl who we talked about for weeks

talk to the girl that when you were dating her
you told me you talked to me more

I honestly can’t stop you
you’re never going to change.

It hurts.

the worst part isn’t that I’m falling for him

its that he’s just not there to catch me

Copyright Â© blondeandbeautiful ... [ 2011-10-19 18:42:28]
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Re: Free Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by cathartic on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 07:07:44 PM AEST
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unfortunately, this "poem"sounds more like a journal entry than an actual poem. next time, try and come up with a metaphor for your feelings. Then post it here. Better luck next time (:

Re: Free Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 04:11:40 AM AEST
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ignore the above guy. Yes some poetry rhymes... bla bla bla, but it is expressing yourself that matters the most.

Metaphors are beautiful, but so is expression. Don't let people like that get you down.

Sounds to me like you should spend some time apart from this person, since they don't seem to be doing you much good at the moment.

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