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Array ( [sid] => 167944 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cupid [time] => 2011-10-19 19:39:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I drove a long time to watch you die without sound

Love ate you out

She put your heart on a hot plate and you watched from a distance as she devoured it whole

She left you

Sitting on the couch

Converter still in hand

Tongue running after her but it forgot to take the words

I’ll take a picture of this moment

A visual representation of this mental state is now documented proof

That love is a *****

I’ll be your cerebral maverick

I’ll be your not so subtle reminder that Shakespeare

only spoke of love
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 22 [informant] => cathartic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

cupid

Contributed by cathartic on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 07:39:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I drove a long time to watch you die without sound

Love ate you out

She put your heart on a hot plate and you watched from a distance as she devoured it whole

She left you

Sitting on the couch

Converter still in hand

Tongue running after her but it forgot to take the words

I’ll take a picture of this moment

A visual representation of this mental state is now documented proof

That love is a *****

I’ll be your cerebral maverick

I’ll be your not so subtle reminder that Shakespeare

only spoke of love

Copyright Â© cathartic ... [ 2011-10-19 19:39:43]
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Re: cupid (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 04:18:13 AM AEST
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not exactly what I expected from the title, :p but very deep. Well done. I especially liked the metaphors. haha

Re: cupid (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 05:55:27 AM AEST
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Hi again:)
& Welcome to YPDC. . . I see you're new to the site & I was once, too. I've found this a nice place to be. :)
I really like this poem of yours as well. Yes love is illusive at times. . . sneaks up on you. Generally if you're
talking about it your not doing it & vis-versa. . . whatever "it" is (including love).
peace elle

Re: cupid (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 07:28:48 AM AEST
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it is unique i give you that one. i felt like the poem and the title worked in a way that just has its own voice/language that no one else knows or speaks. quite interesting. keep writing

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