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[sid] => 168005
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Spiral
[time] => 2011-10-22 11:34:00
[hometext] => the first poem I have ever written. It was written spur of the moment and was not revised before being submitted.
[bodytext] => Poetry is lines on a page, you don't care what they say, emotions unexpressed due to self rightousness this pent up frustration, a big part of our nation sometimes it hurts and sometimes it stings, and you can't distinguish between reality and dreams you may feel tricked you may feel cheated, you've written your life's book and you don't want to read it how'd you get here, there, where … are you, the choices you've made, the cards that you've played how did it happen, a downhill spiral that started so suddenly and you gained momentum until the end … here … the bottom although now … there's only one direction left to go in … up God lead me, God take me … and make me … into what you want me to be let me see … your vision for me [comments] => 1 [counter] => 73 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Staton [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
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