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[sid] => 168110
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Quiet Contemplation
[time] => 2011-10-26 00:30:00
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[bodytext] => Blind love and broken dreams, A long day of misery. All this he gives to me, There is no God that I can see. Finally gifted a rose. Brightened my day, this I know. Meant to be I suppose. Too late there she goes. Now I'm left all alone, In this dark world that's so cold. Fearless and bold, I seek that which I know. Then in the shadow of the day, The nightmares are here to stay, The bodies won't go away, The blood rushes through my veins. I wake up in my room, Breathless in this tomb. Another day to go through, So I can creep back to the gloom. If I had more to say, I would put pen to paper once again. Until then in my pain, This evil I hold at bay. Thank you I'm meant to say... I hate this life, what a shame. -------------------------------------------------------------- # Description # -------------------------------------------------------------- Hi, this is some poetry I wrote today. It's from my own experiences and how I was feeling. Each line is read in two parts. For example, "Blind love" ... "and broken dreams". See the pause in between? Please tell me what you think. Thanks. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Despa1r [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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