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No one cares-I hurt and cry.
I want something so incredibly bad
But I can't have it and it makes me sad.
Becauses I'm trying my hardest with all my heart
But still, my insides tear apart.
What do people expect me to do?
You say I'm pathetic...I agree too.
Why do I have to be this way?
Why do I have to suffer every day?
Why doesn't anyone ever ask me why?
It makes me think they don't care if I die.
No one tells me they love me,
If they do, I don't feel like they mean it,
No one says they are so proud,
Of all my accomplishments.
People should tell me these things,
But they don't, and it brings me sadness.
Why am I so unlovable?
Why do so many people despise me?
Why do so many people hurt me?
I never did anything to deserve this...
I am just not worth it.
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Contributed by aLoNe-I-cRy on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I hate myself and I want to die
No one cares-I hurt and cry.
I want something so incredibly bad
But I can't have it and it makes me sad.
Becauses I'm trying my hardest with all my heart
But still, my insides tear apart.
What do people expect me to do?
You say I'm pathetic...I agree too.
Why do I have to be this way?
Why do I have to suffer every day?
Why doesn't anyone ever ask me why?
It makes me think they don't care if I die.
No one tells me they love me,
If they do, I don't feel like they mean it,
No one says they are so proud,
Of all my accomplishments.
People should tell me these things,
But they don't, and it brings me sadness.
Why am I so unlovable?
Why do so many people despise me?
Why do so many people hurt me?
I never did anything to deserve this...
I am just not worth it.

Copyright © aLoNe-I-cRy ... [ 2003-05-01 12:05:00]
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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:23:12 PM AEST
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well i just have to say a few things.. first off what does it truly matter what the rest of the world thinks of you.. u are worrying bout what they think as they are worrying about what u think and its a never ending cycle.. life is as hard as u allow it to be.. it's getting out of that pattern of seeing urself through others eyes and just seeing urself for who u are.. and that's u.. everything that comes with that, good, bad, ugly, beautiful.. it's life.. so when it all seems so complicated maybe it's much more simple.. maybe it's just life..how u take that tho is up to you. Not those around you.. screw them.. lol.. Be proud to be you.. and u will already be doing better than most, cuz most can't do that..

anyway, that's me rambling.. lol.. i liked the poem by the way.. :P

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 03:39:25 PM AEST
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Ahh your poem is so sad... maybe because I know the place you are at. I have thought and wondered many of the same things. Life is hard, but what we struggle through makes us stronger and enables us to make it through the next difficulty we face. I hope writing poems is an outlet for you. It certainly is for me.

In any case awesome poem if ya wanna chat feel free to PM me. Hope yer doin ok and you are worth it everyone is.

Bobo (Joel)

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