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[aid] => mick
[title] => Peaceful Race
[time] => 2011-11-10 09:32:38
[hometext] => So i have an assignemt for english and I was wondering if anyone could help me improve or just help me. The assigment is this Write a short poem of approximately 10 lines describing an important event (either personal or historical) or an emotional state
[bodytext] => You take your marks and wait. The suspence is killing you, then the buzzer sounds and you dive off. You feel that it was a good start. You don’t dare look at the others, All you hear is the tranquilities of the water, the air being released underwater. A wall comes up you panic of cutting short. But you didn’t, you flip and push off. You finally look at the others, you see you are ahead. You hear a faint, cheer of your name. You feel tired, but you must keep going. You take your last breathe and go faster. Relief comes when you touch the wall, You try to catch your breathe, with a big grin on your face. Everything seems so surreal, but you Did it and that’s all what matters. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 74 [topic] => 51 [informant] => katiemac [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )
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