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Look whos back from laughing at your Lord
Look whos back with life as a reward
Look whos back and not moving forward

Im still alive, but why
to kill myself, I try
it gets me nowhere, I cry
to get out and to die
just to leave and to fly
to be an angel up high
to look down from the sky
yes Im hoping to die
but your Gods saying no
that I just cant go
that it just cant be
that I have to be me
but I have to be free
and I just cant see
a future for me
in a wold so unjust
where theres no one to trust
now Im starting to break
and I just cant wait
and Im starting to shake
wonder what is my fate
and how long it will take
and why I dont rate
Im ready to die
so again I will try
and if I dont die
again I will try
and again I will try
and some time I will die
I WILL DIE I WILL DIE
eventually I WILL DIE

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I will die

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Look whos back fresh out the psych ward
Look whos back from laughing at your Lord
Look whos back with life as a reward
Look whos back and not moving forward

Im still alive, but why
to kill myself, I try
it gets me nowhere, I cry
to get out and to die
just to leave and to fly
to be an angel up high
to look down from the sky
yes Im hoping to die
but your Gods saying no
that I just cant go
that it just cant be
that I have to be me
but I have to be free
and I just cant see
a future for me
in a wold so unjust
where theres no one to trust
now Im starting to break
and I just cant wait
and Im starting to shake
wonder what is my fate
and how long it will take
and why I dont rate
Im ready to die
so again I will try
and if I dont die
again I will try
and again I will try
and some time I will die
I WILL DIE I WILL DIE
eventually I WILL DIE

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-05-02 01:05:00]
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Re: I will die (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:58:35 AM AEST
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life is cruel,,but we live with trials in our lifes,,sometimes i wish that i could but i cant,,its something thats part of life,, a friend in words,,spooky

Re: I will die (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:40:13 AM AEST
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Spooky is right. People and life can be so cruel.
It seems that some of us have more hardships than others. There is a reason for our heartaches and trials. It makes us into a better stronger person along the way. Your expression was very good in this poem. I hope that happiness knocks on your door very soon. You deserve it!!
Michelle

Re: I will die (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 12:24:47 AM AEST
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well unlike the thers i must say i love it, i know what you are saying i tried death several times before.i do wish you happiness but it is nice to know i am not the only one that feels this way.

Re: I will die (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 10:42:15 PM AEST
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I liked this and can relate to it to some extent. I don't know you, but I know life is worth living no matter how hard it is... or seems. You can get through this. Just find some good coping methods maybe writing poetry is one. Hang in there...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: I will die (User Rating: 1 )
by Dan666 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 09:05:42 AM AEST
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You only live once!

Dan666

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