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JamesHowlett

You come in sorrow
You come in pain
You come to borrow
You come in shame

You’re here to cry
To let your insides die

I want you to let you know
I’m here
I won’t go
Don’t fear

I’ll be a bucket for your tears
A basket for your cries
I’ll take away your fears
I’ll look deep into your eyes

Feel no shame
Let me take your pain

Feel free to cry
Just look me in the eye

So much past
So little known
I forge a new mask
One that can be shown

I’ll always be here for you
You’re my friend
There’s nothing you can do
I’ll be here till the end

I’ll look deep in your eyes
I’ll steal your pain
I’ll listen to your cries
I’ll take away your shame

I wish I could show you
How I feel inside
But there’s nothing I can do
Except look deep into your eyes

Let me take your pain
It doesn’t deserve you
Let me take your pain
He doesn’t deserve you

Your thoughts, your mind
Your heart, your smile
He doesn’t take the time
To just stop and make you smile

I’ll feed you strength
I’ll take your pain
I expect no thanks
Only your pain

Let me keep it locked inside
I’ll always stay your friend
I only wish to look deep into your eyes
And see you happy, until the end. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 412 [topic] => 43 [informant] => JamesHowlett [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Until the End

Contributed by JamesHowlett on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Until the End
JamesHowlett

You come in sorrow
You come in pain
You come to borrow
You come in shame

You’re here to cry
To let your insides die

I want you to let you know
I’m here
I won’t go
Don’t fear

I’ll be a bucket for your tears
A basket for your cries
I’ll take away your fears
I’ll look deep into your eyes

Feel no shame
Let me take your pain

Feel free to cry
Just look me in the eye

So much past
So little known
I forge a new mask
One that can be shown

I’ll always be here for you
You’re my friend
There’s nothing you can do
I’ll be here till the end

I’ll look deep in your eyes
I’ll steal your pain
I’ll listen to your cries
I’ll take away your shame

I wish I could show you
How I feel inside
But there’s nothing I can do
Except look deep into your eyes

Let me take your pain
It doesn’t deserve you
Let me take your pain
He doesn’t deserve you

Your thoughts, your mind
Your heart, your smile
He doesn’t take the time
To just stop and make you smile

I’ll feed you strength
I’ll take your pain
I expect no thanks
Only your pain

Let me keep it locked inside
I’ll always stay your friend
I only wish to look deep into your eyes
And see you happy, until the end.

Copyright Â© JamesHowlett ... [ 2003-05-02 16:05:00]
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Re: Until the End (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 05:12:24 PM AEST
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This is so very sweet and thoughtful of you, James...
Jenni

Re: Until the End (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:20:50 PM AEST
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So touching. You show in this poem the word friendship!! A person is blessed to have you as a friend.
Michelle

Re: Until the End (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:36:36 PM AEST
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This is a look into your very soul, my friend. Lovely words and sentiment. A lucky friend, indeed. Dot

Re: Until the End (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 09:59:54 PM AEST
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You must be an incredible friend. The friend in your poem is very lucky to have you, I hope you can tell this friend how you feel the way you have told so many of us. You define what it is to be a friend. If only all of us were lucky enough to have a friend like you. Dylan

Re: Until the End (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 01:42:43 AM AEST
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He is a great friend. He is so insperational, and i love him. THanks for everything, your my best friend!!

Re: Until the End (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 01:22:56 AM AEST
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beautiful write!

mckayla

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