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Array ( [sid] => 168970 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Rose [time] => 2011-12-02 15:44:07 [hometext] => This is a poem about the one I can see, but I cannot have.. [bodytext] => Beyond the river, upon a hill
Grows a wild rose
If I will ever reach this flower
Heaven only knows

The hill is high, the river wide
There is much that stands between
The rose that grows upon the hill
The most beautiful I've seen

It may have some thorns and withered leaves
But this I know for sure
The lust I feel to hold this rose
Is nothing else but pure

I know the river could drown my soul
And the hill is infinately high
But I will risk it all to make
This lovely flower mine [comments] => 3 [counter] => 116 [topic] => 2 [informant] => hansond83 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The Rose

Contributed by hansond83 on Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 03:44:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Beyond the river, upon a hill
Grows a wild rose
If I will ever reach this flower
Heaven only knows

The hill is high, the river wide
There is much that stands between
The rose that grows upon the hill
The most beautiful I've seen

It may have some thorns and withered leaves
But this I know for sure
The lust I feel to hold this rose
Is nothing else but pure

I know the river could drown my soul
And the hill is infinately high
But I will risk it all to make
This lovely flower mine




Copyright © hansond83 ... [ 2011-12-02 15:44:07]
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Re: The Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 04:39:06 PM AEST
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Another good write.
blessings,
emy


Re: The Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl61 on Friday, 2nd December 2011 @ 08:18:15 PM AEST
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This is an enjoyable read. Has a wonderfully fluid flow. tfs


Re: The Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Saturday, 3rd December 2011 @ 06:22:56 PM AEST
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Nice. I like the flow of your words. To me bad flow kills a poem even where the word choice is good. To long for that one beauty... don't we all know that feeling all to well. I hope you get your rose. Truly , Doug




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