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Array ( [sid] => 16904 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Pain Eats Way (See) [time] => 2003-05-02 20:05:00 [hometext] => *Written during another manic-depressive attack* [bodytext] => See the despair covers my eyes
See as my eyes bleed black
See as a coat of loneliness
Is draped around me, so heavy

Does it make you happy?
Does it makes you smile?
Throw me away, down the stairs
Turn away in disgust

My use is over
The depression has its way with me
Watch as the pain eats away
And leaves a smoking crater in my brain

Drinking from the waters of pain
It stains me, burns its way down
I'm helpless, defeated, pathetic
I can't hold on

See me as I cry
See me as I cut deep
See as death takes me over
And its cloak covers me...
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Pain Eats Way (See)

Contributed by bobotheclown on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

See the despair covers my eyes
See as my eyes bleed black
See as a coat of loneliness
Is draped around me, so heavy

Does it make you happy?
Does it makes you smile?
Throw me away, down the stairs
Turn away in disgust

My use is over
The depression has its way with me
Watch as the pain eats away
And leaves a smoking crater in my brain

Drinking from the waters of pain
It stains me, burns its way down
I'm helpless, defeated, pathetic
I can't hold on

See me as I cry
See me as I cut deep
See as death takes me over
And its cloak covers me...

Copyright Â© bobotheclown ... [ 2003-05-02 20:05:00]
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Re: Pain Eats Way (See) (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM AEST
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believe in your self and the words will of pain will subside,,a friend in words,,spooky

Re: Pain Eats Way (See) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 11:13:51 PM AEST
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{{{{Joel}}}}} Your pain reaches the reader!
May you be well.... Poetry is a great form of release!!!! :-D Beutifully spoken!!!
Angel always....Godspeed!!! joni

Re: Pain Eats Way (See) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 11:16:05 PM AEST
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*beautifully spoken!!!!!
A stickler for spell check! ;) take care! :-D

Re: Pain Eats Way (See) (User Rating: 1 )
by bopeep on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 12:11:23 AM AEST
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very very deep dude. i loved it. keep it up

Re: Pain Eats Way (See) (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 11:49:16 PM AEST
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aww joel i like this but its so sad...i really wish i could do something to make you feel soooo much better...love ya :O)

Lindsey

Re: Pain Eats Way (See) (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-Cry on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 10:34:54 AM AEST
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i love this poem,it is very sad(tear).
thx for ur comment on my poem

Joëlle

Re: Pain Eats Way (See) (User Rating: 1 )
by mystical_illusion on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 05:25:33 PM AEST
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Wow, i loved your poem so much. Describes beautifully feelings that are so well known.
-things will get better
thanx for writting,
kelly

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