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[sid] => 169045
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[aid] => mick
[title] => you shoulda stayed close kid
[time] => 2011-12-05 13:26:04
[hometext] => this poem is about how a father would feel after loosing his little son becuase he slipped away from him 4 just one second
[bodytext] => innocent and young with no reason for death mom always told u to stay close for a reason kus u never knew if it might be the last time u left what if you died i would never tell u goodnight before u fell into bed cant get rid of my head the fact that you aint alive! the fact that you dead is tearin me inside this THIS hurts i wish i could hide it forget about it but u ment so much to me ur not here i still cant believe cant believe that it took 9 months for u to become and a few seconds for you to leave for ur heart beat to stop tapping when mom said smthn is kus she knew somthn bad was fnna happen stay close kid u aint old enough to be wondering of these words arent to harm u there to keep you from harm from flying above take you outta harms way wish i could go back to dat day and stop u from from slipping my hand how can i as a man let my kid leave and let that moment be kid u shde listenna me but still it was responsibility to keep u close i dont have you no more only in my heart hurts this hurts i cant go next door and play lil toy cars with my kid far apart u got hit by a car and so did my heart get hit [comments] => 0 [counter] => 129 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lyricalpoet [notes] => Please do not comment on your own work. Your comment on this poem has been removed. Thank you. Moderator_18 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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