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Wake up from my rest
Get out of bed then get dressed
I come to school and focus on all the scary people that wouldn't give me the time of day
I go from class to class being labled as the quiet girl gosh
At the end of the day I finally go home to be botherd by my thoughts about life
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When will I grow up

Contributed by knowWhat_kind on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I close my eyes at night
Wake up from my rest
Get out of bed then get dressed
I come to school and focus on all the scary people that wouldn't give me the time of day
I go from class to class being labled as the quiet girl gosh
At the end of the day I finally go home to be botherd by my thoughts about life
When will I grow up when will I get a life

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Re: When will I grow up (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 09:25:39 AM AEST
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be patient, baby girl, you'll get
to where you want to be.
we all started confused and young...

Re: When will I grow up (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 10:19:33 AM AEST
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Everything comes with time... don't rush it. You'll be the one better off, not those that don't care or even bother.

Very nice write....

Amy

Re: When will I grow up (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 10:49:18 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem
ur right some pple lable us without even getting to know us or maybe they just don't care to but whatever their problem is it's not ur and i think everything will turn out just quite alright for u...

Re: When will I grow up (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:37:30 PM AEST
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you have a life darlin', and a beautiful soul, its wonderful writing out your feelings and sharing them with the world, write on:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: When will I grow up (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 04:51:28 AM AEST
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hey i like this and i think youre a good poet

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