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Array ( [sid] => 169379 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LOVERS REMORSE [time] => 2011-12-17 06:48:59 [hometext] => when all is lost except a common bed [bodytext] => Two share the same bed
absent all but haggard flesh.
Years of empty hearts wedged
between two still torsos.
Time torn lovers and friends
baked into a fruitless pie
in an oven heated by deceit.
Ones' devious indiscretion
the others' unforgiving heart
forbade passage back to the
dwelling of Siamese souls.
Passion lost in a sea of loathing
and dieing in a stench of mistrust.
Now beyond revival and being
used for mutual torture, for
each not having the fortitude
to break the paper chains.
And yet reaping some twisted
almost perverted reward in drowning
the other in the misery of their
empty sharing of vast nothingness.
A marriage glazed over like a frost
that smothers and distorts the view
of a cold Decembers pane of glass.
Escape would only free
the lover that you hate. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 112 [topic] => 32 [informant] => maverick47 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

LOVERS REMORSE

Contributed by maverick47 on Saturday, 17th December 2011 @ 06:48:59 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Two share the same bed
absent all but haggard flesh.
Years of empty hearts wedged
between two still torsos.
Time torn lovers and friends
baked into a fruitless pie
in an oven heated by deceit.
Ones' devious indiscretion
the others' unforgiving heart
forbade passage back to the
dwelling of Siamese souls.
Passion lost in a sea of loathing
and dieing in a stench of mistrust.
Now beyond revival and being
used for mutual torture, for
each not having the fortitude
to break the paper chains.
And yet reaping some twisted
almost perverted reward in drowning
the other in the misery of their
empty sharing of vast nothingness.
A marriage glazed over like a frost
that smothers and distorts the view
of a cold Decembers pane of glass.
Escape would only free
the lover that you hate.

Copyright © maverick47 ... [ 2011-12-17 06:48:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: LOVERS REMORSE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 10:16:22 AM AEST
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Fergive me, I'm all excited readin' this stuff of yers 'til I run out of yer posts. Some insights 'n' perspectives of somethin' or other Divine. This'ns so in line, although more brilliantly scribed, with a little flash of brilliance I once had years ago called, In Love. Please read. Kudos on this piece, pard.
wabl
KenMoore
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