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Array ( [sid] => 169573 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rebuild [time] => 2011-12-22 22:41:37 [hometext] => Wrote this during a comercial while watching ghost adventures [bodytext] => Tossed away like a broken toy
Left to fill this empty void
I fell for you
My love was true
You threw it back
Claiming I lacked
You took my innocence
You took my pride
You left me down
I wish I died
It took forever but I finally found it
My temper
My hate
My pride
Even if it was too late
Thank you for breaking me
Giving me a chance to rebuild
I am whole
Regained what you stole
And I'll never break again [comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Anara [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Rebuild

Contributed by Anara on Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 10:41:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tossed away like a broken toy
Left to fill this empty void
I fell for you
My love was true
You threw it back
Claiming I lacked
You took my innocence
You took my pride
You left me down
I wish I died
It took forever but I finally found it
My temper
My hate
My pride
Even if it was too late
Thank you for breaking me
Giving me a chance to rebuild
I am whole
Regained what you stole
And I'll never break again

Copyright © Anara ... [ 2011-12-22 22:41:37]
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Re: Rebuild (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Thursday, 22nd December 2011 @ 11:39:30 PM AEST
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everybody breaks...

just saying... ^_^

keep writing.

Re: Rebuild (User Rating: 1 )
by aliopterix on Friday, 23rd December 2011 @ 05:17:08 PM AEST
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Thank you for sharing in your words. It must be cathartic for you. I hope you are in a good place now - - a touching poem. All the best - - Aliopterix

Re: Rebuild (User Rating: 1 )
by spencer1607 on Sunday, 25th December 2011 @ 10:05:14 AM AEST
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I can definitely sympathize with this one

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