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Liar
Contributed by
Mikki
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Sunday, 8th January 2012 @ 01:59:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Mommy, he said it, he said it was true Mommy, he said it, this love wont go blue Mommy, he said it, Ive waited so long Mommy he said it, in this we belong Mommy, he said it, he said it was real Mommy, he said it, he knows what I feel.
Mommy, he meant it, hell never let go Mommy, he meant it, well live and well grow Mommy, he meant it, he knows what he said Mommy, I cant get it out of my head.
Mommy, he loves me, it all feels so right Mommy, he loves me, I now see the light Mommy, he loves me, my future is bright Mommy, hes dreaming of my voice tonight.
Mommy, hes lying, these words dont feel pure Loves a disease, and hes finding the cure Mommy, hes lying, his heart beats so weak Mommy, hes lying, I wasnt unique.
Mommy, he broke me, he tore me apart Mommy, he hurt me, he shattered my heart Mommy, he scarred me, he darkened the light Oh Mommy, he broke me and killed me tonight.
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2012-01-08 13:59:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Liar
(User Rating: 1 ) by dvtpdw on
Sunday, 8th January 2012 @ 02:08:35 PM AEST (User
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Such strong emotions pour through your words. Tugged at my heart and soul. Great great emotional write. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Liar
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th January 2012 @ 02:48:37 PM AEST (User
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This gripped me, the reader, 'n' took me on a bright hopeful, in denial trip through the journey of many
liars 'n' lies 'n' emotionally poured it on in the end of a liar's life. If only they hadn't lied to mommy.
wabl
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