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Array ( [sid] => 170083 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mind Revelations [time] => 2012-01-09 14:14:01 [hometext] => Your mind reveals your true thoughts. Sometimes you need to listen to them. [bodytext] => Simple thoughts that enter your sight,
Become complex journey’s and story lines at night.
Awake to sweat and wonder which is reality?
Are these images true? Or am I approaching irrationality?

Night after night these images repeat,
They’re just random thoughts, nothing complete.
But in the back of my mind, they still linger around,
I can’t help to wonder, is that where my answer is found?

Frequency of occurrence continues to increase,
Ignoring is not working, its tearing me at the crease.
At last I surrender, my dreams they were fire,
Down deep I extracted my soul’s true desire.
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Mind Revelations

Contributed by nluchett on Monday, 9th January 2012 @ 02:14:01 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Simple thoughts that enter your sight,
Become complex journey’s and story lines at night.
Awake to sweat and wonder which is reality?
Are these images true? Or am I approaching irrationality?

Night after night these images repeat,
They’re just random thoughts, nothing complete.
But in the back of my mind, they still linger around,
I can’t help to wonder, is that where my answer is found?

Frequency of occurrence continues to increase,
Ignoring is not working, its tearing me at the crease.
At last I surrender, my dreams they were fire,
Down deep I extracted my soul’s true desire.

Copyright Â© nluchett ... [ 2012-01-09 14:14:01]
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Re: Mind Revelations (User Rating: 1 )
by VILenin on Monday, 9th January 2012 @ 02:43:28 PM AEST
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I like this, Very well written

Re: Mind Revelations (User Rating: 1 )
by angelus8663 on Monday, 9th January 2012 @ 04:29:19 PM AEST
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The flow of this piece is excellent and I think everyone can relate to it. Great Job

Re: Mind Revelations (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 05:10:57 AM AEST
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nice job ... sometimes our thoughts do need listening to ... nice reminder

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