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[title] => Simply Goodbye
[time] => 2012-01-15 20:04:06
[hometext] => an optimistic poem for those whom find it hard to move on after a lost love.
[bodytext] => I promise to make this the last time you hear from me about our relationship and my feelings towards you. I am really sorry things came down to this. I was blessed by God to have been your love for a great period of time. You have and will forever hold the key to my happiness in this life. Being real, I know we will both have our next loved ones but it will never be the same because you are the happiness in my life. As you are the happiness in my life, you are also the downfall in my life. This is the point of no return where the truth and reality slaps me in the face in order to wake me and take me away from what i thought was a real life love story. This strike opens my mind to the truth; a truth that has been looking at me hard in the face, just mocking my ignorance. I hold nothing against you, life is too short to hate people. I know your intensions were always good, even to the end of us you always kept it real. I talk to Life about everything around me and Life shows me the light on you while darkness is everywhere else. See talking to life has caused my perspective to change on how I handle my everyday life situations. Life has taught me how to distinct the Good and the Evil, the intelligence and the ignorance in the presence of an imperfect world. I wish we could have made it ce, in the presence of an imperfect world. I wish we could have made it sweetie but imperfection was already born within us. I have deep feelings just like any other real person, unlike fake people who chose to hide their inner feelings because they have a fake pride they like being praised for. Well i have pride too, but my pride revolves around my Life. My pride stems from being real as much as possible. Life talked me out my ignorance ways. Now that you have given me your back, I have no choice but to give you my back. Two negatives make a positive. With both our backs turned facing negative, our lives are soon to become positive. So now that I have given you my back also, I move on farther away taking my pride, and Life as my best friend. At this point, I look back and the light that was shining through the darkness is now fading away and getting smaller as time goes on. I thank you for being my love and shining light of the past. Now I look forward, still talking to my best friend Life in my mind, while Time is leading me away. Life is telling me to look on beyond the darkness because another light is waiting for me in the distance. As of tomorrow, your light will disappear from my darkness and in turn appear only in my heart to stay forever. Goodbye! Your light will rest in peace in my heart.
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Simply Goodbye
Contributed by
loveU2
on
Sunday, 15th January 2012 @ 08:04:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I promise to make this the last time you hear from me about our relationship and my feelings towards you. I am really sorry things came down to this. I was blessed by God to have been your love for a great period of time. You have and will forever hold the key to my happiness in this life. Being real, I know we will both have our next loved ones but it will never be the same because you are the happiness in my life. As you are the happiness in my life, you are also the downfall in my life. This is the point of no return where the truth and reality slaps me in the face in order to wake me and take me away from what i thought was a real life love story. This strike opens my mind to the truth; a truth that has been looking at me hard in the face, just mocking my ignorance. I hold nothing against you, life is too short to hate people. I know your intensions were always good, even to the end of us you always kept it real. I talk to Life about everything around me and Life shows me the light on you while darkness is everywhere else. See talking to life has caused my perspective to change on how I handle my everyday life situations. Life has taught me how to distinct the Good and the Evil, the intelligence and the ignorance in the presence of an imperfect world. I wish we could have made it ce, in the presence of an imperfect world. I wish we could have made it sweetie but imperfection was already born within us. I have deep feelings just like any other real person, unlike fake people who chose to hide their inner feelings because they have a fake pride they like being praised for. Well i have pride too, but my pride revolves around my Life. My pride stems from being real as much as possible. Life talked me out my ignorance ways. Now that you have given me your back, I have no choice but to give you my back. Two negatives make a positive. With both our backs turned facing negative, our lives are soon to become positive. So now that I have given you my back also, I move on farther away taking my pride, and Life as my best friend. At this point, I look back and the light that was shining through the darkness is now fading away and getting smaller as time goes on. I thank you for being my love and shining light of the past. Now I look forward, still talking to my best friend Life in my mind, while Time is leading me away. Life is telling me to look on beyond the darkness because another light is waiting for me in the distance. As of tomorrow, your light will disappear from my darkness and in turn appear only in my heart to stay forever. Goodbye! Your light will rest in peace in my heart.
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2012-01-15 20:04:06]
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Re: Simply Goodbye
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by girish on
Sunday, 15th January 2012 @ 10:59:51 PM AEST
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| I had written many love poems for lost loves LOVE is never lost only the person is seperated. |
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Re: Simply Goodbye
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by LoveU2 on
Monday, 16th January 2012 @ 07:20:34 AM AEST
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Yea, u never love for such loved one, it stays in your heart but u always move on to find another love.
Ps. I can't seem to edit this so I can take away 1 line that shouldn't be there, I hope people can still understand this deep poem. |
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