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Array ( [sid] => 17027 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Hurt to the bone.....all alone [time] => 2003-05-04 20:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => He gives another smile
trying to say everything will be alright
to show that he cares
but he knows it wont get by
he doesn't know what to say
just closes he's eyes and prays

she refused to see the true
life ain't like your youth
she stopt to live
just laying in her bed and waiting for something to fulfil
all feelings are gone
shes hurt to the bone

He sites by her bed
holding her hand
saying he will help find her magical land

she dosen't say a word
pale,cold and unware
starring up in nowhere
scars left on her wrists
made in her very deep mists
when tears did't help
and screams did't felt



and this is her way to say........I'm not OK [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MissMichelle [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Hurt to the bone.....all alone

Contributed by MissMichelle on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



He gives another smile
trying to say everything will be alright
to show that he cares
but he knows it wont get by
he doesn't know what to say
just closes he's eyes and prays

she refused to see the true
life ain't like your youth
she stopt to live
just laying in her bed and waiting for something to fulfil
all feelings are gone
shes hurt to the bone

He sites by her bed
holding her hand
saying he will help find her magical land

she dosen't say a word
pale,cold and unware
starring up in nowhere
scars left on her wrists
made in her very deep mists
when tears did't help
and screams did't felt



and this is her way to say........I'm not OK




Copyright © MissMichelle ... [ 2003-05-04 20:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Hurt to the bone.....all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Sunday, 25th May 2003 @ 07:47:11 PM AEST
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wow...you write with such pathos


Re: Hurt to the bone.....all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 01:38:32 PM AEST
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Wow that was very touching and yet so sad. Hope everything going to be alright. Lovely write.


Re: Hurt to the bone.....all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by arakrune on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 09:32:50 PM AEST
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WOW




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