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Array ( [sid] => 170567 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In The Night [time] => 2012-01-30 22:52:12 [hometext] => THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I'VE POSTED ANYTHING PUBLICLY THAT I'VE WRITTEN OTHER THAN TO FRIENDS ON SOCIAL NETWORKS. IT'S NOT PERFECT STRUCTURE AND I'M NOT A PROFESSIONAL BUT THE WORDS ARE TRUE. WOULD LOVE FEEDBACK. [bodytext] => In the night, skin collides with endless opportunity and teasing touch.
No words are spoken.
Loves' memory is all that is wanted.

Breathe in the soul of that night's treasure,
the pursuit of an empty hearts happiness.
Embrace the body that gives such pleasure, draped in sheets and bound to his kiss.

Intoxicating, the memory, there is no escape from you.
Moments of blinding passion allow sight of the truth.
Shattered thoughts of rekindled romance, only a feeling of old flame can ignite that universe.

Inches away and worlds apart, the bed has now grown cold.
Yet touching of fingertips leads to caresses of skin and I can feel myself getting pulled back in...
…and the night begins again. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 22 [informant] => missused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

In The Night

Contributed by missused on Monday, 30th January 2012 @ 10:52:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

In the night, skin collides with endless opportunity and teasing touch.
No words are spoken.
Loves' memory is all that is wanted.

Breathe in the soul of that night's treasure,
the pursuit of an empty hearts happiness.
Embrace the body that gives such pleasure, draped in sheets and bound to his kiss.

Intoxicating, the memory, there is no escape from you.
Moments of blinding passion allow sight of the truth.
Shattered thoughts of rekindled romance, only a feeling of old flame can ignite that universe.

Inches away and worlds apart, the bed has now grown cold.
Yet touching of fingertips leads to caresses of skin and I can feel myself getting pulled back in...
…and the night begins again.

Copyright Â© missused ... [ 2012-01-30 22:52:12]
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Re: In The Night (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 31st January 2012 @ 09:30:24 AM AEST
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I loved it, such dark passion in such few words, keep on writing and I will try to read as much as I can. TY for posting this fellow poet!

Re: In The Night (User Rating: 1 )
by richard2 on Tuesday, 31st January 2012 @ 01:21:15 PM AEST
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You show much promise, with interesting phrasing.
I like the shortness, you don't have to be a professional to write good poetry. I am firm believer in the ideal that good writing should be precise as possible, while still maintaining the beauty of phrase and word.

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