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Array ( [sid] => 17077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => one day waiting [time] => 2003-05-05 14:35:00 [hometext] => inspired by the girl who inspires me...my angel [bodytext] => im held up breaking the silence with cries
im bottomed out wrecking my mind for peace
i was cought red handed laughing amusing myself alone
dying day dreaming up on clouds and screaming

could u wreck this and forget me
could u find me standing on my own
with my eyes shut closed hoping u'll feed me

i never picked a fight, i couldnt hold my own to
i do believe u took the best of me
im sick of songs they all end the same
dying day dreaming up on clouds and screaming

could u wreck this and forget me
could u find me standing on my own
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one day waiting

Contributed by Apartment213 on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

im held up breaking the silence with cries
im bottomed out wrecking my mind for peace
i was cought red handed laughing amusing myself alone
dying day dreaming up on clouds and screaming

could u wreck this and forget me
could u find me standing on my own
with my eyes shut closed hoping u'll feed me

i never picked a fight, i couldnt hold my own to
i do believe u took the best of me
im sick of songs they all end the same
dying day dreaming up on clouds and screaming

could u wreck this and forget me
could u find me standing on my own
with me eyes shut closed hoping u'll feed me

Copyright © Apartment213 ... [ 2003-05-05 14:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: one day waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 04:53:55 PM AEST
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great write! i love this line it is excellent,"dying day dreaming up on clouds and screaming" you've shown quite vivid emotion and images:) hugs nessa

Re: one day waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 06:55:27 PM AEST
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Love this poem! Great words, great flow ... excellent write. ... Jan

Re: one day waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 02:01:15 AM AEST
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kenny, i love you...i love you mroe then words could ever say...you're the best thing that has ever happened to me and im never going to let you get away....you're stuck with me forever...perfection...just beautiful...

Lindsey (Your Angel)

Re: one day waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by SomethingClever on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 02:48:18 AM AEST
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Shocking... it's been a lot better, friend. As for the both of you... for shame... :)

You've come a long way, at least in my opinion.

Re: one day waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 09:34:43 AM AEST
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Well done on this!
I enjoyed reading it! Christina

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