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[title] => Wednesday is Goodbye
[time] => 2012-03-15 12:30:52
[hometext] => I have lunch with my grandparents every wednesday between class at college, over the past few months my 81 year old grandfathers health has deteriorated, he constantly beats off cancer and other illnesses and injuries but his time is soon to be up.
[bodytext] => Ive never really written a poem before but I became inspired on the train home the other day. I hope you all enjoy, I would love feedback. Thanks very much, Sean. Wednesday is Goodbye. Old grey bones rattle around slowly, carefully, to be placed with caution smiling on, heart beating quietly Every moment is real Every moment could be his last A blue sky drips over death tenements box to box, 40 years of nothing I watch the old man, Pale colours in the smoke Comfort dressed with ash surprised at his own perception Clean shaven and waiting, the help he needs he gets older by the hour catching glimpes of memories Box to box, he will be at home rest his broken body cursing the days spent inside we could have done more to make his departure more homely but we had too much to bare this poor old man lies lonely wishing his pipe and can were there [comments] => 3 [counter] => 73 [topic] => 13 [informant] => yesyesok [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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