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Array ( [sid] => 17136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Underdog [time] => 2003-05-06 18:05:00 [hometext] => just wrote this on the spur of the moment.
sorry if its awwwwwwwful.
Im on alot of pain med now. broke my leg today at work. woopie. At least I can work on my novel.

Peace- [bodytext] => numbness was my childhood best friend
they played on the monkey bars loudly
the under dog I vowed Id always would defend

I spent my 6th grade nights reading silently
they skated and kissed at the new roller rink
while my blood should have boiled violently

I was a heavy, teased, medicated little child
I just wanted to help the kids in my class
even when they where nothing but vile


I figured yes, maybe
it was now time
for a new me
so I started
climbing up
on my favorite
old tree

I kept a journal,
and tried to grow
but it seemed that
what ever anyone else reaped,
for them I had to sow.

i worked hard
on myself
for 7
years

broken bones
and grit
and sweat
and tears

and all the while
not with a smile
i ran down the feild
with instructions to defile
this opposite team
under rain and snow
and bright sun beams

I was the strongest on the feild
and given the job
to make sure
their striker
would yeild

I was taught new moves to take her out
now matter what they told me in those
minutes
that was not what this was about

I walked with a numbness
i had never carried all those years
only anger now was surfacing
along with jets of tears

I had never intended it to be this way
I was going to be an artist
I didnt want to even play

I quit that day,
my life was my own now,
and concentrated on art,
- get used to it some how

Its funny
how we turn from a protector
to the hunter
in one fell swoop
all to make sure we are not vunerabule anymore
or left out of the loop.




[comments] => 1 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 21 [informant] => theblackswan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Underdog

Contributed by theblackswan on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



numbness was my childhood best friend
they played on the monkey bars loudly
the under dog I vowed Id always would defend

I spent my 6th grade nights reading silently
they skated and kissed at the new roller rink
while my blood should have boiled violently

I was a heavy, teased, medicated little child
I just wanted to help the kids in my class
even when they where nothing but vile


I figured yes, maybe
it was now time
for a new me
so I started
climbing up
on my favorite
old tree

I kept a journal,
and tried to grow
but it seemed that
what ever anyone else reaped,
for them I had to sow.

i worked hard
on myself
for 7
years

broken bones
and grit
and sweat
and tears

and all the while
not with a smile
i ran down the feild
with instructions to defile
this opposite team
under rain and snow
and bright sun beams

I was the strongest on the feild
and given the job
to make sure
their striker
would yeild

I was taught new moves to take her out
now matter what they told me in those
minutes
that was not what this was about

I walked with a numbness
i had never carried all those years
only anger now was surfacing
along with jets of tears

I had never intended it to be this way
I was going to be an artist
I didnt want to even play

I quit that day,
my life was my own now,
and concentrated on art,
- get used to it some how

Its funny
how we turn from a protector
to the hunter
in one fell swoop
all to make sure we are not vunerabule anymore
or left out of the loop.








Copyright © theblackswan ... [ 2003-05-06 18:05:00]
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Re: Underdog (User Rating: 1 )
by harmoni on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:46:19 AM AEST
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NEVER GIVE UP ,FOR WHAT YOU CAN DO TO DAY. HARMONI




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