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100 wilted roses
Contributed by
punky
on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We went out for dinner
took a walk on the beach
You presented me with a bouquet of roses
explained that each one represented something
how many beats your heart skipped when you saw me.
I ran up to my room, put them in a case
loving the feeling of being in love.
Soon petals started falling,they wilted on the floor
then i got a phone call, saying you werent interested anymore.
Now the petals are on the floor,the stems in a vase half full.
All thats left are the thorns.
Just like flowers love doesnt last forever
sooner or later all that will be left
are the wilted petals and memories.
The thorns are left to stab you in the heart
and you are left there crying
until someone new brings another bouqet
that you know will eventually wilt.
So enjoy love while it lasts because soon all thats left are thorns
and 100 wilted roses of memories.
Copyright ©
punky
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2003-05-07 01:05:00]
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Re: 100 wilted roses
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 01:52:19 PM AEST
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| So sad that this happens alot but it was well said! I like how you presented the rose like a relationship! Great! Christina |
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Re: 100 wilted roses
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 04:20:05 PM AEST
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| ***** happens hu! i hate that! Well i liked this poem though! I'll take your advice! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: 100 wilted roses
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by YourHandsMyHeart on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 08:00:52 PM AEST
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its so sad, but true, some love dies out. It is a sad sad thing, but as they say..."It is better to have loved and lost than to never have love at all." Beautiful poem, keep writing!
~Mandy |
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Re: 100 wilted roses
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by Rachel on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 08:37:12 PM AEST
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| wow. It can be so hard to write about love, but you do it well. Great poem. |
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