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Array ( [sid] => 1716 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Someone [time] => 2002-08-04 15:32:16 [hometext] => It's amazing to see how far one caring person can go... I hope this poem shows someone, anyone, that there really are people who need love, even from a stranger. [bodytext] => Would someone please
Just look into my eyes?
See the pain etched in them,
The one I can’t disguise.
Someone please ask me
Why I wear sunglasses all the time,
If someone would just ask me
I promise I wouldn’t lie.
I can’t get out on my own
I am too afraid,
Would someone help me make my life my own,
Get me out of the path of his rage?
I just need someone to help me,
One person who doesn’t just stare,
Someone to say “How can I help?”
God, just one someone who cares!
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Someone

Contributed by ginsdance on Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 03:32:16 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Would someone please
Just look into my eyes?
See the pain etched in them,
The one I can’t disguise.
Someone please ask me
Why I wear sunglasses all the time,
If someone would just ask me
I promise I wouldn’t lie.
I can’t get out on my own
I am too afraid,
Would someone help me make my life my own,
Get me out of the path of his rage?
I just need someone to help me,
One person who doesn’t just stare,
Someone to say “How can I help?”
God, just one someone who cares!

Copyright Â© ginsdance ... [ 2002-08-04 15:32:16]
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Re: Someone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 04:29:10 PM AEST
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This is powerful... so true how people just stand back and stare when someone is being oppressed. Very powerful indeed!

Re: Someone (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 08:45:15 AM AEST
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So, so true Gin...excellent piece!
Chrissie xx

Re: Someone (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 01:06:18 AM AEST
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yes, an emotional write to explain the pain of one who is pleading for help. So many people out there are too afraid to get involved, this is why many just stare. But Its not easy just do that. My ex one time pulled me away from a scene and wouldn't let me aid in helping. I called him a whimp, he manhandled me to get away. That person was beaten so badly and the other person got away. so sad. Very good write, hope somone can learn from this.
Amber Rose

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