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Burning Tempers, Burnt Temples
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
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Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 11:43:12 PM in AEST
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The house is on fire,
she's got an insurgent fever,
she's burning up fast.
Flames like a million embittered enemies
with a billion degrees of separation
suddenly finding themselves
obliterating each other
in a cramped suffocating room.
Sacred statues burn,
resembling warring effigies
that cast sharp and menacing shadows.
A brittle thermometer
explodes into smithereens
as a voice, imploding
screams from within
the dynamite of a ruckus.
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2012-04-05 23:43:12]
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Re: Burning Tempers, Burnt Temples
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th April 2012 @ 11:51:17 PM AEST
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Anger, fear, aggression; the dark side of the Force are they.
Much like an explosion this is. I could really feel the anger.
Nice writing.
Thanks,
Tim
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