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Array ( [sid] => 171962 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the divorce [time] => 2012-04-16 15:25:04 [hometext] => I am yet another daughter of the hot shot poet there is 4 of us on here [bodytext] => I get up they start yelling
I go to my room,my dog check's on me
I walk back up stair's,I'm told to pack my thing's
I start crying,Mom does'nt care
Dad look's at me say's I will miss you
I was drug away,mom's cussin
I'm ignoring,pretending I was with daddy
Mom get's to grandma's,I go to grandma's bed
I went to sleep,Mom does'nt even realize
grandma comes in and wispers,
"I'm sorry baby, for tonight. I'll take you in tomorrow."

The Hot Shot Poet's Princess. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 133 [topic] => 21 [informant] => thehotshotpoetprincess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

the divorce

Contributed by thehotshotpoetprincess on Monday, 16th April 2012 @ 03:25:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I get up they start yelling
I go to my room,my dog check's on me
I walk back up stair's,I'm told to pack my thing's
I start crying,Mom does'nt care
Dad look's at me say's I will miss you
I was drug away,mom's cussin
I'm ignoring,pretending I was with daddy
Mom get's to grandma's,I go to grandma's bed
I went to sleep,Mom does'nt even realize
grandma comes in and wispers,
"I'm sorry baby, for tonight. I'll take you in tomorrow."

The Hot Shot Poet's Princess.

Copyright © thehotshotpoetprincess ... [ 2012-04-16 15:25:04]
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Re: the divorce (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 17th April 2012 @ 02:57:34 AM AEST
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deep expression here. I went through alot of this when I was little so I get what you are saying here. I hope everything works out well for all of you:)

Michelle

Re: the divorce (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Tuesday, 17th April 2012 @ 03:46:33 PM AEST
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I like this. It's like a slice of life type of poem. It held my interest so that I had to see what was going to happen. Nice work.... seriously wondering though... is it all girls or did your dad ever have any boys? Four... is a lotta daughters. lol. take care , truly , Doug

Re: the divorce (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Monday, 22nd February 2016 @ 07:11:53 AM AEST
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yes my dear you are for sure one of my daughters,,i love you

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